吸血鬼：
各位同學打醒十二分精神吧! 今天我們要好好練習腦袋，看看作者的論點和推論過程到底是否合理。如果推論過程出錯，是會令文章說服力降低，從而失分。
2013年10月3日 星期四
吸血鬼學堂X百插成才：文章解剖 2
上一課，基於篇幅所限，吸血鬼只介紹了一篇學生的作文，而且只集中在文法和詞彙。今日，Dracula會介紹同一篇作文，講講文章的論點和推論。
吸血鬼：
各位同學打醒十二分精神吧! 今天我們要好好練習腦袋，看看作者的論點和推論過程到底是否合理。如果推論過程出錯，是會令文章說服力降低，從而失分。
吸血鬼：
各位同學打醒十二分精神吧! 今天我們要好好練習腦袋，看看作者的論點和推論過程到底是否合理。如果推論過程出錯，是會令文章說服力降低，從而失分。
2013年9月28日 星期六
吸血鬼學堂X百插成才：文章解剖 1
上一課，吸血鬼介紹了立場題議論文的基本結構，並邀請各位同學提交他們的作文。不料，反應熱烈，看來人類學生一點也不害怕Dracula。
不過，最令Dracula高興的是眾多作文中不乏佳作。既然已經加盟至Autodidact 自學者，吸血鬼將會詳細講解其中三篇作文。基於篇幅所限，今日會介紹其中一篇，並先集中文法改正：
首先重溫作文題目：
In Hong Kong, many students in local primary and secondary schools are under great pressure. They take extremely difficult examinations and face fierce competitions. Many students and parents are meanwhile given an impression that international schools are 'paradise', which brings little pressure but immense benefits to students.
Hence, it is said that studying in international schools is better than studying in local schools in Hong Kong. Do you agree with this statement? Give three reasons to support your stance.
不過，最令Dracula高興的是眾多作文中不乏佳作。既然已經加盟至Autodidact 自學者，吸血鬼將會詳細講解其中三篇作文。基於篇幅所限，今日會介紹其中一篇，並先集中文法改正：
首先重溫作文題目：
In Hong Kong, many students in local primary and secondary schools are under great pressure. They take extremely difficult examinations and face fierce competitions. Many students and parents are meanwhile given an impression that international schools are 'paradise', which brings little pressure but immense benefits to students.
Hence, it is said that studying in international schools is better than studying in local schools in Hong Kong. Do you agree with this statement? Give three reasons to support your stance.
2012年11月25日 星期日
百插成才第二擊: Group Interview Skills (DSEPPQ8)
2012DSEPPQ8
Your friend is going for a job interview
for the position of Part-time promoter for a mobile phone company. It will be a
group interview. Your friend is very nervous and has asked for your advice.
Write an email to your friend offering advice on how to prepare for interview
and what to do during interview.
2012年11月3日 星期六
百插成才(一):Qualities of World Cities(AL2011Q3)
Learning from people's strengths and weaknesses is the key to excellent writing. The following essay was written by a student who achieved distinction in the 2011 A-level writing paper, with detailed analysis and comments given by me. You can see the question below and download the file below.
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