Learning from people's strengths and weaknesses is the key to excellent writing. The following essay was written by a student who achieved distinction in the 2011 A-level writing paper, with detailed analysis and comments given by me. You can see the question below and download the file below.
Every year, traditional newspapers rank world cities according to their qualities. Such qualities include affordable medical care, cultural activities, equal opportunities, good education, a fair legal system, and a good social welfare system. Write an article for your school magazine ranking the three qualities from the list which you believe are the most important, and give reasons for your choice. Provide an appropriate title for your article.
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